RE: VibesWeb3 MusicCompetition week№26 [Effort]

Thanks for sharing your entry.
You represent the hip hop section of our community. This entry seems a bit too simple
Not enough effort really. I wanna hear a sharper flow
It is too relaxed and laid back
I want to hear you rap over a beat with passion heart and energy
I want to hear you really flowing
You can do way better than this
Please level up your quality and presentation man
And please provide lyrics in english and spanish, I want to know what you are rapping about and other people too.
Happy holidays