RE: If I Aint Got You- Vibes Web3 Music Competition Week38

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@maytasaki, this is really nice singing, it definitely has some highlight moments and some sweet spots where you really take control of the tonality, melodic musicality and deep passionate singing with stylistic vibrato and charismatic delivery, however there are some other sections where you lose a bit of traction and momentum as there was a slight change of energy and approach, but I like how you maintained your fun engaging attitude. The entry wasn't a one take live performance, you edited two videos together as one piecing the best parts together, please try and do it all in one single take, you definitely have the vocal capability, the talent and potential to display full control for the full length of the song, and also, aside from your great voice, it would do you well to write between 350-500 words for your Post entry rather than 35 words. Talk a bit about the song, why you chose it, what it means to you, performances are more interesting with a bit of a backstory or sentimental tie to it, especially when us judges have heard a song many many times before, it just helps to separate those performances more uniquely from the rest, another suggestion for the post is to provide the lyrics as well for the audience to read along. Please keep in mind that people are watching you, looking up to you, and you can inspire many in the community, so when you put forth the effort into all aspects of your entry, it's a wonderful thing to see because people will follow after you. Thanks for sharing your gift of music, your voice is blessed.



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