VIBES WEB 3 WEEK 15 //🎵 Dear Lord – original song written & performed by@shemZee
Dear friends,
I am excited to present the updated version of my song, previously known as "WINGS OF THUNDER," which I posted during VIBES Week 13. Thanks to a brilliant suggestion from @verbal-d, I have added a powerful and dramatic chorus to intensify the song's message:
Dear Lord, give me strength to carry on
All my life Ive shivered to the bone
Dear Lord, wont you help me find my way
I`d love to feel your gentle rain
The song "DEAR LORD" delves into themes of struggle, resilience, and the quest for divine guidance. It reflects the yearning for strength amidst life's challenges and the hope for spiritual solace. The verses explore the passage of time, the burden of guilt and wonder, and the relentless hunger for a sense of purpose. The repeated plea for the ability to "fly with wings of thunder" symbolizes the desire for divine empowerment and transformation.
I hope you enjoy this new version and feel the profound message it conveys. Your feedback is always appreciated!
LYRICS:
Dear Lord
Dear Lord, give me strength to carry on
All my life Ive shivered to the bone Dear Lord, wont you help me find my way
I`d love to feel your gentle rain
One step inside the new day
And the night is over
Smoke in the sky rising high
And you`re growing older
Why cant you fly love divine with your wings of thunder? Why cant you fly love divine with your wings of thunder?
Sun rising high in your eyes
Full of guilt and wonder
Storm in your mind
You are blind
You still feel the hunger
Why cant you fly love divine with your wings of thunder? Why cant you fly love divine with your wings of thunder?
Dear Lord, give me strength to carry on /All my…/
All my life Ive shivered to the bone Dear Lord, wont you help me find my way /And I../
I`d love to feel your gentle rain
Dear Lord…
I really enjoy it great playing the guitar and the way you sing is just amazing, a beautiful song
I can so hear this in the faster rock version, guitar and all, that would be a great one, I don’t know many gospel rock.
The title of the song drew me, I’m a huge fan of “Dear God” songs because that’s what I love to do: talk to God about the biggest and simplest of things. I love your gentleness and softness with the music and the strumming is really complimenting the conversation. Goodluck in the contest and have a wonderful week!
Excelente interpretación de verdad me erizó la piel, que canción mas buena 🎶🎶