🎵 Hive Open Mic 189 - DEEPER UNDERGROUND - an original song by@shemZee ENG/ESP
ENGLISH
Dear friends, here`s a new song of mine called " Deeper Underground"
"Deeper Underground" takes listeners on a dark and intense journey through its compelling narrative. With a pulsating rhythm and raw vocals, it vividly depicts a tale of love, crime, and consequences.
The lyrics paint a vivid picture of Jackie Brown and Billy Sikes, entangled in a dangerous love affair amidst a gritty underworld. The imagery of a castle on a cloud juxtaposed against the violent backdrop of New Heaven creates a stark contrast that adds depth to the story.
The driving force of the song lies in its relentless repetition of "Go down deeper underground," echoing the characters' descent into a darker realm both literally and metaphorically. The recurring phrase acts as a haunting refrain, emphasizing their inevitable spiral into the depths of their fate.
Lyrics:
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper ....
Once upon a crime there was this girl called Jackie Brown
she fell in love with friend of mine the best gunman in town
His name was Billy Sikes also known as Billy Frown
They shared an old smoker pipe and a castle on a cloud
Oh , yeah
A castle on a cloud
Yeah
A castle on a cloud
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper ....underground
They drove around New Heaven in his big black Cadillac
looking for some racketeer who didn`t pay for crack
Jackie Brown took him to the outskirts of this town
Billy got his gun and shot that bugger down
Shot down
around New Heaven town
Shot down
deeper underground
Shot down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper ....underground
They tried to leave New Heaven in his big black Cadillac
but after seven days there was no way back
Jackie & Billy died in the outskirts of this town
they took the path to hell now they`re underground
Shot down
around New Heaven town
Shot down
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper underground
Go down
deeper ....
ESPANOL
Queridos amigos, aquĂ les presento una nueva canciĂłn mĂa llamada "Deeper Underground".
"Deeper Underground" lleva a los oyentes en un viaje oscuro e intenso a travĂ©s de su narrativa cautivadora. Con un ritmo pulsante y voces crudas, describe vĂvidamente un relato de amor, crimen y consecuencias.
Las letras pintan una imagen vĂvida de Jackie Brown y Billy Sikes, enredados en un peligroso romance en medio de un sĂłrdido mundo subterráneo. La imagen de un castillo en una nube yuxtapuesta contra el violento telĂłn de fondo de New Heaven crea un contraste marcado que añade profundidad a la historia.
La fuerza motriz de la canción radica en su repetición implacable de "Ve más profundo bajo tierra", haciendo eco del descenso de los personajes a un reino más oscuro tanto literal como metafóricamente. La frase recurrente actúa como un estribillo inquietante, enfatizando su inevitable espiral hacia las profundidades de su destino.
Letra:
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo...
HabĂa una vez un crimen, una chica llamada Jackie Brown
se enamorĂł de un amigo mĂo, el mejor pistolero de la ciudad
Su nombre era Billy Sikes, también conocido como Billy Frown
CompartĂan una vieja pipa y un castillo en una nube
Oh, sĂ
Un castillo en una nube
SĂ
Un castillo en una nube
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo... bajo tierra
Recorrieron New Heaven en su gran Cadillac negro
buscando a algĂşn estafador que no pagara por crack
Jackie Brown lo llevĂł a las afueras de esta ciudad
Billy sacĂł su pistola y derribĂł a ese tipo
Derribado
alrededor de la ciudad de New Heaven
Derribado
más profundo bajo tierra
Derribado
más profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo... bajo tierra
Intentaron dejar New Heaven en su gran Cadillac negro
pero despuĂ©s de siete dĂas no habĂa vuelta atrás
Jackie y Billy murieron en las afueras de esta ciudad
tomaron el camino al infierno, ahora están bajo tierra
Derribado
alrededor de la ciudad de New Heaven
Derribado
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo bajo tierra
Ve más
profundo...
Watching you for the first time. I enjoyed your strings, you have a deep voice too. Good rendition.
Wow...I really do love lyrics that really yels a story.
This is really lovely from you.
Greetings Bro! How good it is to see you here again, you have presented wonderful music and the best of all is your incredible presentation, both on the guitar and vocally, you are a complete artist with the gift of making every word you write or sing dance. Your song is powerful and I feel like it fits with our weekly theme, bravo!!!
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This is amazing, keep it up sir
Amazing rendition, you have got a good voice.