HIVE OPEN MIC WEEK #173 - "MEMORIES" (Original Song by @rialvocal)

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Hello everyone nice to se you again ini this great commnity. In this special week I want to present you my original song, called "Memories". I tried to make this song to follow this week's theme, "Memories". This theme is chosen by our community's recent Spotlight Artist: @rukkie. Wow! Hive Open mic Week 173 with a very interesting theme. I think, this is the right time to make an original song.
It's not an easy matter for me, because with all the limitations I dared to compose songs in English. Yes, this is the first time I have composed an English song for me. Please provide suggestions and criticisms from all of you in this community, so that I can be even better in the future to creating songs in English like this.
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Talking about memories. Everyone has memories in his life, there are bad memories and good memories. Forget the bad memories, make it a lesson so that it will be even better in the future. Save beautiful memories, so that your life is always happy. Memories will always make an impression on our minds, our memory capacity should be limited, but everything that has meaning in our lives will be remembered forever.
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Hopefully this song can represent your feelings towards your beautiful memories. This song tells about a couple who have to separate for some reason, but they try to make as many memories as possible in the last seconds before they part, so that they will still remember each other and trust each other. Although distance has separated them, love still unites them. Hope you guys like this song, I made it with simple tones and lyrics so it's easy to remember and sing.
enjoy...

Lyrics "MEMORIES - @rialvocal"

Give me a nice momories for our love
Before I go...
Give me a whisper, that you will be mine
Forever... Forever...

I just want you to know
How much I love you so...
Ooo... Before I go... Before I go...
I just want you to know
I will miss you forever...

Give me a nice momories for our love
Before I go...
Give me a whisper, that you will be mine
Forever... Forever

I just want you to know
How much I love you so...
Ooo... Before I go...
I just want you to know
I will miss you forever...


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Beautiful rendition dear friend
I'm glad that you choosed to do your original song. It's incredible and I commend you.

Well-done 👏

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Good work friend, excellent sound, excellent voice, a very complete job, greetings!

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Separation can be very tough but the sometimes, the beautiful memories created can help in the process of healing.

I love your interpretation to the theme. Thank you for this beautiful rendition.

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You are very welcome 🙏
I really agree with what you said. Thank you so much @rukkie for choosing a very interesting theme for this week.

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Since you arrived at Hive Open Mic you have illuminated the community with your light and excellence, thank you very much. Please consider voting these comments to help grow the HP of our community.

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thank you very much @hiveopenmic , it makes me feel proud and honored. I will give my best for this community.

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You are one of the best things that has happened to Hive Open Mic and the entire platform. You are very talented and you do everything with a lot of passion. I really wish you the best of success brother, keep working as you are going, you are already an example for others...

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Reading your comments makes me even more excited to work and give all my best for this community.
Thank you very much my friend @jesuslnrs I hope you are also successful with your best works.
My Regards ❤️

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Wooow, gran talento bro. Una muy hermosa voz, además de ser una canción escrita por ti, realmente es maravilloso escucharte. 🔥😎

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This is unbelievable! How do people get to sing and play in such a beautiful, wonderful, excellent, marvelous and mesmerizing way?💯

Hello @rialvocal, you just added more light to my day. ❤️🎻🥁Cheers 🥂🥁🥂

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Hello @onos-f, thank you very much. You also make me more excited to work.
Cheers my friend 🍻

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You are super talented @rialvocal ...with the voice of an Angel..

Wow.. Am blown away.

Great job friend
Don't stop singing👏👏👍

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Beautifully captured the essence of memories and love in your heartfelt song. 🎶 Your courage to compose in English shines through, and your message about cherishing both the good and the bad memories resonates deeply. Keep creating and spreading joy through your music!

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Maravillosa interpretación amigo @rialvocal, tu canción hermosa en letra y melodía. Hiciste un excelente trabajo y con tu carisma llegas al corazón de lo que te escuchamos. Mi admiración y respeto amigo. Felicidades y éxitos😊👏👏👏👏🤗🥰🔥😌🎤💜💚❤️💕

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gracias por tu aprecio mi amigo @nellynohemi, me haces sentir orgulloso y honrado. También te deseo éxito y salud siempre.

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Wonderful interpretation friend @rialvocal, your beautiful song in lyrics and melody. You did an excellent job and with your charisma you get to the heart of what we heard from you. My admiration and respect friend. Congratulations and successes 😊👏👏👏👏🤗 🔥😌🎤💜💚❤️💕

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