I Think I Saw You in my Dreams
This is some song lyrics that I wrote. I'd like some opinions on it please. I am, by far, not an expert, but I do enjoy trying. I can handle criticism as well as praise, so please be honest. I don't expect it to be like the professionals but for an amateur, what do you think?
Usually, with song lyrics, I let them sit about a week and re-read them. I do that 3, sometimes 4, times, depending on how many changes are made, before I consider it finished.
This time I figured I'd do something different to see how that goes.
CHORUS:
I think I saw you in my dreams.
And I’m wondering just what that means.
Oh, baby please give us a chance.
To be in love and make some romance.
I saw you standing by the door.
Just like so many times before.
Just as you started to walk away,
I had to go up to you to say
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Chorus
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Walking by beautiful, tall and lean
The most perfect woman that I’ve seen.
My mind and heart have already fell.
There’s something to you I need to tell.
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Chorus
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Music
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Darling I’m glad you are in my life.
I’m so happy that you are my wife.
The love between us you can really feel.
I think of the day that I revealed.
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Chorus
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One-time extra chorus after last regular chorus.
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I thought I saw you in my dreams.
Now I know just what that means.
Oh, baby thank you for the chance.
To be in love and make some romance.
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Oh, baby thank you for the chance.
To be in love and make some romance.
Photo: Pixabay - Artist: Geralt
Howdy y’all. It’s me, ninong7 aka UJ aka John. Just a short intro about myself. I am a Texan that has retired in the Philippines. I moved to the Philippines with my wife back in May 2010. I am retired from the US Air Force. The music I like is mostly Classic Country and Classic Rock. I guess you could say that I am “Classic”. I play dominoes when I can find someone that will play, I play chess, cribbage, spades, hearts, Empire Builder, Rail Baron, Acquire and a few other games. I like to write poems and stories (although pretty novice) and I love learning about history, just about any history. I’m at home on my computer a lot but if I could afford to, I’d be traveling and documenting my travels to post in my blog. I hope to get to know a lot of you through PeakD and Discord.
Well, i am not a perfect person to say.
But these are really amazing words.
Appreciated.
Very good words really, continue like this and if you see that there is no support it does not matter. Always forward Juan 🙌🙌🙌