VIBES WEB 3 COMPETITION, WEEK 32 || SAFE SPACE written and sung by ME! || Celebrating my birthday

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My time here on the vibes community has been a vibe....so far!
It has given me the motivation and inspiration to continue in my journey as a full on Artist although struggling because I'm still starting out...

For this week's entry, I'll be singing my song written by myself, so it is an original song and i hope you enjoy it. I wrote this song to celebrate my birthday which was last month and really just my essence as a person. Would you wish me a happy belated birthday?


created using pixellab by me

Please do well to give me constructive criticism and feedback as I'm trying to learn more and grow more. I hope you enjoy this song as much as i enjoyed making it.

Here is the lyrics:

Heyya ya ya ×3
Hmmmm

People be moving mad
They tryna bring me down
But they can't tear me down No no no
Cause they don't understand

Them tryna quench this light
And them tryna cut my life
But they can't burn me out, no no no
Cause they don't understand that

Imma disappear back to my shell
And reappear when I'm feeling well
That my flex Na Na Na
That's how I calm down
Imma disappear back to my shell
And reappear when I'm feeling well
That's my flex Na Na Na
That's how I calm down

Can I get a why mm
Why you really you really wanna see me cry
And you know I dey try
So why you really wanna see me die

But I be steady
Doing it with ease
Steady, stepping
Stepping up my steeze
No dey para cause you know say I believe, you know say I believe in me

So Imma disappear
Back to my shell
And reappear when I'm feeling well
That's a flex right there
That's how I calm down
So Imma disappear
Back to my shell
And reappear when I'm feeling well
That's a flex right there
That's how I calm down

Heyya ya ya ×3
Hmmmm
Heyya ya ya ×3
Hmmmm

Imma disappear
Back to my shell
And reappear when I'm feeling well
That's a flex right there
That's how I calm down

Did you enjoy it?
Special shout out to the judges: @verbal-d , @silentscreamer and @lordbutterfly. Words cannot express my gratitude for this opportunity to be heard and the honourable mentions so far. Big shout outs to every other creative on the vibes community and out there.

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@meverse,
Happy belated birthday. I hope it was a great one, this was a strong solid original song, nice vibes and grooving and a soulful bounce, the lyrics are not too much, a light easiness to sing along to, I like the overall song structuring, and the transitions, I would say, next time use an instrumental without the beat producer tag in the background, there are plenty of free beats to use, even entire libraries of copyright free songs to use from websites, secondly I think you are still holding back on the song, I feel there is a portion where you really sing a bit more passionately and outburst of emotion which adds a climax portion of this other laid back kind of vibe, just a suggestion, and thirdly, when competing in a competition, don't be afraid to redo the entry one more time, especially with you knocking over something at the end of the video, everything counts, and the ending should always be clean and strong :) Hope that helps. Thanks for participating and sharing your gift of music

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Beautiful rendition my dear @meverse .
Your original song is Lit..

And I truly enjoyed listening to you..

Welldone dear 👍🌹💕

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