Be More - Self reflectory rap

Hi guys i wrote this song while i was self reflecting, thought i should share with you.
Its self explanatory 🥲. I know you would pick up one or two things that'd help you be better.
*Don't stay down if you fall pulling yourself takes work i mean real work but itll be worth it at the end.

I want the kinda life
that gon make me live more
I want the typa eyes
that gon make me see more
I want the typa hands that gon
help me be more
I want to be so alive
I want to live long

I want be tappin in from
above my threshold,
I want be singing my song
with all slow mo
when I come ,
they gon glare
but I still pose

I don't stop
I just step in with intro

y'all didn't know
when I fell from the window

when I thought I could cheat pass my level
life taught me cool and so hard was each level,
now I sure what it means to me,
I'm stepping my shadow

Bro
I didn't lay off
If I fell then I fell
I didn't stay down
I kept ringing my bell,
I can't stay down

I'm so sure,
I can't fail now

I'm being made now.

God help us as we grow together navigating life lessons,aquiring required knowledge and wisdom to be successful in akl our passionate endeavors. 💪🏾💯✅
Shout out to HIVE.