VIBES Week 25 / Deep Blue Sea - Original Song By Kmichealson
Hello friends, it's Vibes week 25; my name is Kmichealson, and I'm excited to be participating this week.
For this week, I composed an original song, which I titled Deep Blue Sea. It's a love song, that has got a nice flow and rhythm to it.
I feel that those who have felt a true and deep love, can greatly relate to the lyrics of this song. The kind of love that pushes you to improve yourself in every way you can. A kind of love that awakens a greater consciousness of life, and unconditional love within you; and you intuitively know that your love for this person is deeper than the deep blue sea.
https://youtube.com/shorts/CDGUFMjryco?si=yHMNrHsYAiRIdDzM
LYRICS -
VERSE 1:
Me I widen my breadth for you,
I dive in deeper for you,
Expand my mind for you (for you),
I balance my light for you,
Embrace my shadow for you,
Upgrade my heart for you (only you),
CHORUS:
I love you deeply,
Deeply, deeply,
Deeply,
Deeper than the deep blue sea,
Girl I love you deeply,
Deeply, deeply,
Deeply,
Deeper than the deep blue sea,
VERSE 2:
I nor dey chase,
Right now me I know my place,
For so long, I was lost,
But right now me I've found my face,
No time to waste,
Me I say no time to waste,
I wanna enjoy everyday, enjoy every moment, enjoy every second,
With you my girl,
CHORUS:
I love you deeply,
Deeply,
Deeply,
Deeper than the deep blue sea,
Girl I love you deeply,
Deeply,
Deeply,
Deeper than the deep blue sea,
CHORUS:
Girl I love you deeply,
Deeply,
Deeply,
Deeper than the deep blue sea,
Girl I love you deeply,
Deeply,
Deeply,
Deeper than the deep blue sea, you see
Vibes Promotional Video
https://youtube.com/shorts/KeTS2oIg8N0?si=BpC63ATeTG2LCSqa
https://www.instagram.com/reel/DC9joAfIcJ_/?igsh=MTVybXJtbnFnY2drcQ==
@kmichealson
I admire how you nonstop create new original songs each and every week almost. You definitely have a knack and skill for writing songs and the rhythm and vibe you create is so cool and grooving. But you still have to work on those melodies and note placements. The intonation of being out of key with the instrumental takes away from the musical experience you are trying to create. But overall I love the song concept and the lyrics you have penned and the rhythmic approach for this cool song. Keep practicing your singing and try mimicing notes on the piano to help you with your vocal training of staying in key with the music. Thanks for sharing your originals as always.
GospelMusician/Singer/Songwriter/Rapper/Beat Producer/Pianist/& An Official Vibes Judge
@Verbal-D & The Vibes Team
Thanks for the feedback @verbal-d