RE: My First Song - First Foot On Mars

Took a while. I tried to think of a style I wanted, then tweak it until I found what I liked. Then I went and remixed one section as I didn't like it.

This song wasn't too bad, even though it took a while. It has a flow that worked I think.

I'm working on another one of my poems that has a harder flow and that's proving tricky to find a style that works.