VIBES WEB3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK-35 "NOCK ON YOUR DOOR" ORIGINAL SONG🎶 by @omahboy (REVIEW)

"NOCK ON YOUR DOOR" ORIGINAL SONG🎶 by @omahboy (REVIEW)

Hello guys, I'm @jnpe and I want to share some ideas I have about this entry by @omahboy tittled NOCK ON YOUR DOOR.
Before I move further, firstly I would like to congratulate the young man for the effort he has made by pushing himself to compose a song and engage in the community activities.

From listening to the song I come to understand that it's a song that speaks about love, care and all that has to do with emotional sacrifice, it is a good thing to love and your song speaks really good about it, I love music pattern and your writing skills, but still, you need to put in more work so you can do better, I believe from what I see now that you can actually upgrade, the presentation was dope, and you tried your best.

I still think there's more to achieve, you need to work more on your display attitude, you can be more passionate than the way you were in this song, your sound quality as well needs some workings and upgrade, with this few qualities added to your craft I see you being unstoppable, nevertheless I enjoyed this presentation and had a good time listening to it, keep it up and do not relent, God will help us all Amen.