Hive open mic week #148 // You are my sunshine by Christina Perri
Hello everyone i hope you are all doing fantastic, this is my first time of joining this community and i am well pleased to participate in the ongoing contest which the theme is starlight so i decided to choose this particular song because it talks about someone you love and you can not do with that person for long.
The lyrics
You are my sunshine
my only sunshine
you make me happy
when skies are gray
you'll never know dear
how much I love you
please dont take
my sunshine away.
The other night, dear
as i lay sleeping
i dreamed i held you
in my arms
when i awoke dear
i was mistaken
so i hung my head and cried
You are my sunshine
my only sunshine
you make me happy
when skies are gray
you'll never know, dear
how much i love you
please don't take
my sunshine away.
▶️ 3Speak
This is a good start for you. I wish you well in this space
Thank you
Hmmm, so this is the song I should sing for my girlfriend to show her I can't do without her for long. Thank you Eunice for giving me an instrument to keep my woman,hehe
You are welcome to the community Eunice. Nice presentation.
You may need to improve your write up by explaining how you understand the theme and how the song got to you and you decided to present it and more and more.
However, you do so well. Weldone dear
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your kind gesture, I will try and put all that into consideration next time
You are welcome dear