RE: You knew it, too.
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Your poem pierced me with its rawness. I felt the weight of betrayal and the ache of trust broken, the way your words carry both memory and wound. The imagery of light dimming and darkness overtaking spoke deeply, it mirrored how pain can feel endless, even when healing seems within reach. What stayed with me most was the honesty: the struggle between imagination and reality, survival and surrender. It is haunting, but also powerful in its truth.
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Than you. I appreciate that you touched the weight of betrayal, imagination, darkness, the need to heal, and then surrender. It is a reality of many and glad you could capture it with your words too.