RE: Beyond Doubt: Whispers of the Unseen - Chapter 4

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One poignant chapter (loss of sister) followed by another (loss of mentor, guru)!
Missing word here: No matter how I shook him he did [[not]] come to. A few minutes later I heard his breathing halt completely.
What next (the question I've learned NEVER to ask, except of fictional characters)---
Tune in tomorow for the next installment, right?



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That is what always happens when I start messing with sentences, leaving words in or leaving words out. Thanks for the heads up!

And Yes Indeed, if all goes to plan and life does not mess up my timelines Mo, We, Sa I post the next step

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