VIBES WEB3 MUSIC COMPETITION WEEK15|| AN ORIGINAL BY BOBBYDONES

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Hello hive,

Here is to Vibes Web 3 music competition week 15. I present to you today my first composition ever since I joined the community. I came across this instrumental on YouTube some days ago, I liked it and I thought to do something with it. I started writing the song on Sunday evening, finished it on Monday morning, and shot the video in the evening even though I had yet to master the words well(had to keep checking my notepad so I don't mix them up). I hope you guys find this interesting still and if you have a title suggestion for me, feel free to let me know in the comments

I wouldn't want to bore you by breaking down the song here, like a friend once told me "THE BEAUTY OF A POEM IS IN ITS MYSTERY" but i still feel like i should talk about the chorus though

I know some things cannur fit to change
I know some things cannur fit to change
I know some things cannur fit to change
But darling everything will be okay.

I know some things cannot change, that's the literal meaning i just couldn't find cooler words use other than these pidgin english words. The mountains wil not become rivers just because you love waters, the time will not pause for you just because you are going to miss your train. It's just by nature that some things are not going to change, but everything will always be okay, it is one of those things keeps life in balance.

LYRICS

VERSE 1

As easy as the morning breeze ripples through my clothes
Weakened body cheers to see a new morning
The sun is rising from the east to set in the west
The mother earth lights up as the daylight comes.

I took a step and saw my reflection in the mirror
Wondering if the change was major or just minor
Same face, same nose
Still the same person
The light at the end of the tunnel seems kinda dim now

A tragic-comedy drama without no film-tricks
Oh! It ain't got no hero
Who's gon' save me
I'm screaming ontop my voice now can you hear me
Oh Lord, oh God
Come and save me now.

CHORUS

I know some things cannur fit to change
I know some things cannur fit to change
I know some things cannur fit to change
But darling everything will be okay.

VERSE 2

It even gets scarier when the sun comes down
No glimpse of light everything is gone now
Leaving me at the standpoint where I was
Before the pale yellow sun faded away

I'll look up to God my savior
The creator of the heavens and the earth
He who does not sleep nor slumber
He's got me for life, I just gotta believe.

CHORUS

I know some things cannur fit to change
I know some things cannur fit to change
I know some things cannur fit to change
But darling everything will be okay.


INSTRUMENTAL

https://twitter.com/BobolaTheTailor/status/1810640212793459031?t=8UrcuxjgpT4q6sRScSWEGg&s=19

LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK IN THE COMMENT SECTION, THANK YOU

Love,
Bobbydones.

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It's a beautiful original song. I totally love it.
I love how you sang it ..It sounded really authentic...Nice one bro .... 👏 👏

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Nice song man, got me emotional at some point..no capping.

Love this your original song. You composed a new song and shot the video in about 24hours ? That was fast.

Let's know when you've got a cool title for it. Wish I could a basslines to the song😊.

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Thank you chief, thank you for your honest review.

Let's know when you've got a cool title for it. Wish I could a basslines to the song😊.

I do not mind o

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Ikr...when he said yesterday. I was in shock

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That was really fast, shows he flowed well with his original song.

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I don’t know which to pick as my favourite, the BG vocals, the riffs or the smile at the end 😊😂. Bobby is on 🔥🔥. This is really really good. This is your first original on hive (right?). And you’re killing it. Great one @bobbydones, well done!

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🤗🤗🤗

This is your first original on hive (right?).

Ohh that is true, I didn't even think about it, I thought I was just for vibes community alone. Thank you for helping me think😂.

The BG vocals, I laid those straight out of bed on Monday morning, I didn't think it'd be possible but it turned out fair. I just laid them and adjusted the volume that's all(no preset, no plugins, no effect). Thank you. And for the smile, muchas gracias😁

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This is good and lovely how you easily picked up to create something great with this beat, sounds good.

Your voice is soothing, going with the flow and changing tones to suit perfectly.

Awesome! Thanks for sharing your creativity with us.

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Thank you

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All good @bobbydones! You're a real Hive pro! Onward to that new goal!

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A Bobbydones original is a blessing to hear
Spiritual heartfelt music to the ears
Inspiring and uplifting peers
And creating moments for blissful tears
How the musical skill is levels above tiers
The vision and artistry and clear

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😁🙏🏾🙇🏾‍♂️
Thank you, thank you verbal-d. I appreciate this💯.
It means so much to me to have a pro writer vet my rusty work.

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Had me hooked right from the start
Damn..you're good❤👏🏻

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Thank you Ten🤗, I'm just doing enough. I'm glad that you liked it.

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wow you sang so well. keep it up. Please I need your vote, I was nominated pls
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I'm the first person pls vote for me. Thank to and god bless you so much

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Thank you so much bro🤗, I would have loved to do that but I'm also part of the nominees. I wish us the best bro💖

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You wrote this 🥹, the lyrics are beautiful ❤️
You're a good singer Bobby❤️, and I love your voice 😩❤️

All the best this week✨, I already voted for you 🤗

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