Hive OpenMic week 300// OPENMIC (Original song)

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Hi everyone 🥳🥳🥰 permit me use this opportunity to greet everyone in this community happy new yearrrr, this year shall be a great year indeed. Amen Welcome once again to OpenMic week 300. I'm amazing01 the Sax girl🥰 I am going to be doing a song, an Original song compose by me and my sax including the intro yesss I composed an intro for it also Tittled OPENMIC. (Original song)

This is my first time composing a song and it been shared, to every thing that I could also include an intro of my own, I so much love the me this community OpenMic is bringing out.

Before I continue I will like to write down the lyrics so we could follow
Lyrics
OpenMic OpenMic OpenMic
OpenMic OpenMic OpenMic
OpenMic OpenMic OpenMic
This is a place where dreams are birthed
A platform where dreams are mould
A community musicians are groomed
Every tribes and tongues, let's build it together
OpenMic OpenMic OpenMic
OpenMic OpenMic OpenMic
OpenMic OpenMic OpenMic
Let us come with all our talent
To build a strong community
A place where musicians are groomed
This platform is available for us

When we look at the first version it says, this platform this community is dreams are birthed and mould, I would like to share how this platform especially have groomed me, when I was onboarded by a very good friend aowilson, I was first introduced to this platform, I made videos and Jesusnlrs will also encourage me and with the help of that I could improve on my sax skill.

The verse 2 is a call to every musicians out there, let's come together and make this community a strong and great one, in order to be groomed and learn from each other. Truthful, this platform was intentional created to build people like us and we are so grateful.
See y'all next week 🥰
Shalom🥰🫂

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openmic threespeak curangle ocd saxophone neoxian music
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How beautiful and joyful! A perfect song to share in the 300th edition. Thank you for being here, my good friend, bravo!...

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Bravo! What a beautiful song, melody, rhythm, voice, and lyrics! What you've shared is perfect, my friend. Thank you for joining the celebration of 300 weeks of Hive Open Mic.

We need to make a suggestion, as we noticed there's a background rhythm playing while you're playing the saxophone and singing; you should indicate in your post if someone is accompanying you on percussion or where you obtained the backing track, whether it's from an external creator, royalty-free music, or an app. It's always good to mention the supporting tools, even if you created it yourself.

Don't misunderstand us, your entry is fantastic, but it's good to clarify this last point, as this is a competition for original songs. We await your response, and we send you a warm hug dear friend.

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Thank you so much and I'm so sorry I didn't include that in my write up, please forgive me 🙏

I used a loop, I needed a beat for the song

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Don't worry my friend. Thank you for being here. Hugs!

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